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Fire
Burns Bright
Bites Hot

Fire
Glows Red

Fire
Bent on Destruction
On Burning and Killing
No Escape

The Forest Burns
And Creatures Die
The Sky Is Red

Fire
Beautiful but Deadly
Warm but so Cruel
Fire is light and dark

It kills
and brings Life

Warm
Red
Heartless

Fire
©2007-2009 ~Taasmor
:icontaasmor:

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I wanted to put a poem up here, and I just wrote this for a writing competition on the neopets writers board. It isn't very good.

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:iconaeronne:
Wouldn't it feel more...complete...if you included both sides of Fire, both good and bad?
Good effort, by the way.

--
Only in silence the word, only in darkness the light only in dying life bright the hawk's flight... ~ A Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula LeGuin
:icontaasmor:
It would. I tried, but sort of failed. I think I'll change that. Thanks
:iconaeronne:
You're welcome :D

--
Only in silence the word, only in darkness the light only in dying life bright the hawk's flight... ~ A Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula LeGuin

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